Critique #2

Positives: The appealing parts of this drawing are very limited. The sun in the background is a nice touch. It may make some of the viewers feel warm and fuzzy inside. As well, the blue sky depicts a land that is pollution free. Wonderful attempt!

Negatives: I will number my complaints of the picture. First, a unicorn is supposed to sport a horn not a party hat looking creation. Second, it just doesn't look like a unicorn at all. It resembles a mutated version of ET with four legs. Third, is there a piece of poop in the picture? Disgusting. Fourth, my depth perception may be off...but is the "unicorn" floating above the water?

Overall: 1.629 / 5