Critique #3

Well, well, well! What have we got here?  It looks impeccably creative! Here's what I think:

Positives: What a beauty! The use of colour is absolutely stunning and the detail in the picture is unbelievable! This artist is far beyond her years.  The talent is simply remarkable; it radiates off the drawing.  Great work little one...keep it up!

Negatives: Two aspects of the drawing stand out as negatives.  First, the unicorn is missing a leg!  I am sure one can see how this would create mobility problems for the unicorn.  Secondly, there is a bow and arrow being pointed in the direction of the unicorns face!  It could be a messy result!

Overall: 4.69/5.00

Critique #1

Positives: This one has some great features! For example, the artistry really captures the unicorn's athletic side.  It must have been jumping at least four feet in order to clear that fire!

Negatives: This drawing fails to capture the unicorn's true disposition.  The unicorn depicted in this picture looks tired, miserable, depressed and indifferent to the fact he is jumping over a raging fire!  It is a proven fact that unicorns are independent, confident, bright creatures that would never stoop to shallow levels like jumping over a potentially lethal fire.

Overall: 2.44 / 5.00